Write an essay based academic games.

I would like you to edit my application essay, at the moment I have gone as far as writing out my first draft. The ideas are there I just need a little help with developing my conclusion and sorting out various other grammatical/ spelling issues. In terms of paper length my target is to reduce it to 500 words (I’m unsure what to remove), anything under 650 words will due but that is my limit. Basically the essay is about an interest I have, which in this case is Academic Games, and the gist of why I am so interested in it is because of the various skills and knowledge that I gain through it. Anyways Thank you for your help, even though its paid it is much appreciated.