Re-read your “Sober” Draft and look over the comments and responses you received from your classmates during the Peer Review for Essay 1. For this journal, you will construct a “revision roadmap” in which you reflect on what you have already written and what you hope to address as you work on your “Final” Draft for Essay 1.
Follow these steps:
1) Choose one critique/comment from each peer review that you found helpful/informative.
2) What was the comment/critique about (structure, evidence, tone, etc)?
3) Explain why you found it to be helpful.
4) Explain how you intend to address this critique in your revision? (Be specific. Do not just tell me: “I am going to fix this during revision.”)
Depending on how many Peer Reviews you received, you will need to answer these questions for each on